Filed under: Teaching, technology | Tags: oral history, persuasive writing, undergraduates
I am quite proud of my students this semester, and requested permission to share with you some of their writing (which they make publicly available on their own portfolios designed in my classes this semester).
In Engl 207 (Persuasive Writing), students finished the semester by designing oral histories. This is only a 200-level course. Here they were asked to deploy what they learned throughout the semester about persuasive writing and rhetoric. After practicing rhetorical moves common to Toulminian argumentation, Rogerian argumentation, and Aristotelian argumentation (and learning about logical fallacies, etc.), they were asked to tell a story that the history books don’t tell–with the added complexity of the visual/aural.
Almost all of these students are sophomores or second semester freshmen. None of them reported ever having done video editing before, interviews, or working with technologies like Final Cut Pro, MovieMaker, or iMovie. While there is certainly room for improvement in their final products (transitions, sound, camera angles, etc.), I am so impressed with what they were able to design. I gave feedback on their interview questions and storyboarding, but I gave almost no explicit instruction on how to use the technology. Instead, they were asked to design a 10-12 minute oral history that surfaced for audiences some unique account of a time, place, or situation.
Check out one student’s interview with her mother who is a breast cancer survivor. Minute 7:40 is a truly special moment.
Tanner’s grandfather was a very successful pilot who couldn’t be interviewed for the oral history because he suffers from dementia. Minutes 8:00 and 10:00 are especially meaningful.
Another student conducted an interview with his father who was a sergeant during the Civil Rights Movement. Not only is Lars’ father a really fascinating man on film (students asked Lars if his dad was cast in MIB), but he offers stories of his experience during the ’60s that Lars’ classmates would have never heard.
Inspired by the intervention letters I asked students to write earlier in the semester, Mikayla designed an oral history with a friend of hers whose family members suffer from alcoholism. Showing this video today in class facilitated really candid discussions about how we as a culture don’t talk enough about the ways some folks are genetically predisposed toward alcoholism. It also led us to a discussion about some assumptions about a difference between being an alcoholic and alcoholism.
Emily composed an amazing oral history about her family that made their way to Moscow, Idaho on the Oregon Trail. Fascinatingly, her great-great grandmother kept a diary of their travels and portions of the diary are read during this video. The photography is truly unreal (including a woman riding an ostrich!).
One of the really great things about this assignment is that students get to share who they are in unique ways. Christie, a student who has recently been accepted into WSU’s vet school (without even having graduated from U of I yet!) composed an oral history about the “Then and Now” of dairy farming.
What a joy.
Filed under: rhetoric | Tags: communication, health, innovation, medical rhetoric, post-doc
Scott Graham and I are accepting applications for the following post-doc. If you have questions or leads on possible candidates, let me know!
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Post-Doc, Health Innovation Communication
Deadline: May 18, 2012
The Department of English at the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee seeks to hire a postdoctoral researcher (pending funding) to work on an NIH funded study entitled, “Assessing the efficacy of multidisciplinary CME credit-granting cancer care conferences: A mixed methods protocol.” This project is aimed at investigating the link between required continuing medical education and innovation adoption in multidisciplinary cancer care. The successful candidate will investigate the persuasive and communicative strategies of cancer innovation educators using a mixed methodological protocol (including participant-observation, interviews, surveys, and qualitative content analysis). The successful candidate will also participate in the development and publication of key findings.
A PhD in hand by time of appointment is required. Degree must be in rhetorical studies, technical communication, science and technology studies (broadly conceived), or a related field. Candidates are also required to demonstrate a strong record of within rhetorical studies or STS and a promising research trajectory. Additionally, candidates must have demonstrated experience with qualitative research methodologies. Preference will be given to candidates with an exceptional record of work in TC, STS, or rhetorical studies of medicine or healthcare, experience with the specific methodological protocols of this study, and/or a working knowledge of Atlas-TI.
The successful candidate will receive a salary of $45,000/year plus benefits. A computer and office space will be provided. Start date: September 1st, 2012. The initial appointment is for one year, with the possibility of renewal for a second year.
Application should include: 1) letter of interest, 2) CV, and 3) contact information for up to three references.
Inquiries and applications should be directed to Dr. Scott Graham (grahams@uwm.edu).
UWM is an AA/EEO employer.
Filed under: rhetoric
The following links are for participants in today’s Getting Things Done workshop. I’ll provide more detail surrounding this workshop series at a later date.
The Onion on grammar
Toulmin’s model for argumentation
Em dash love
Filed under: rhetoric, writing | Tags: occupy wall street, visual rhetoric

“Metonymy, taking signs, especially images, as somehow embodying the things they are signs of is deeply rooted in all of us, primitive or modern.”
-Olson, The World on Paper, p. 29
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“…basic writing students write the way they do, not because they are slow or non-verbal, indifferent to or incapable of academic excellence, but because they are beginners and must, like all beginners, learn by making mistakes. These they make aplenty and for such a variety of reasons that the inexperienced teacher is almost certain to see nothing but a chaos of error when he first encounters their papers. Yet a closer look will reveal very little that is random or ‘illogical’ in what they have written” (p. 6).
Mina Shaughnessy’s Errors and Expectations
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Jerry’s Map
“My hand puts the paint on the paper and then I stand back and say, ‘wow, look at that.’ As though I was not the perpetrator. I’m just the observer”
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“As transformers of meaning and makers of culture, we are all deeply responsible for the immediate consequences of our Designing and, in a large sense, our individual and collective futures” (p. 205).
Cope + Kalantzis, “Designs for social futures.” In Multiliteracies.
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The Hereford Mapa Mundi “charts both the known world of the physical, and the unknown world of belief.”
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Lewis + Clark: “These mountains are covered with snow.”
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Future colleague: “Northern Idaho is all about not being able to get anywhere because there are no roads.”
Filed under: methodology, research | Tags: ATTW 2011, CCCC 2011, dimmensionalization, observational heuristic, theoretical memoing
I’ve returned from ATTW and CCCC and while trying to recover from my usual post-air-travel illness I’ve been reading some of my colleagues’ thoughtful blog posts wherein they reflect upon their experiences.
I have a lot to say about ATTW and CCCC, but I’ll keep this brief.
First, I was pleased to have a student, Amanda Haruch, accompany me for both conferences. I’m beginning to understand how important it is to generate interest in rhetoric and writing studies as a life cause if we plan to sustain our field.
Second, ATTW is my conference home. The panels, papers, and presentations were engaging, thoughtful, well-prepared, and the audience members were truly present. I wish ATTW were longer than a single day. I’m also very pleased to see the number of medical and scientific rhetoric related panels represented at ATTW this year.
Finally, I can’t help but feel like I could have done a better job at both of my talks. In particular, I had the privilege to be a part of two really smart panels–the latter (at C’s) was on “Contesting Methodological Boundaries in Rhetoric and Writing.” Brian McNely, Scott Graham, John Monberg, and I designed this panel based on our interest in expanding our field’s investigative gaze beyond talk and text.
In his thoughtful post about C’s, Derek Mueller articulates the following questions he was left with after our panel’s presentation:
What makes surfacing decidable for a researcher? And, How much context is enough (when enlarging contexts)? And, To what extent is correctable black-boxing turning to verbal references for relief from self-evidentiary or natural-appearing visuals?
These are some really excellent questions. I can’t quite wrap my head around the last one, but I feel a tug to respond to the first two.
We always “surface” things as researchers. And we’re always making (sometimes implicit) decisions as researchers about what gets surfaced. And this is perhaps the point: it has become almost over determined in our field that talk and text are the most important “surfaceable” phenomena. I’d like to part ways with this assumption. And if we doubt that this is not a prevailing perspective, then I will have to take some time to quantify how many sessions I went to where analyses of websites and documents were the primary means by which researchers made claims about writing and rhetoric.
One researcher in particular analyzed the ways farmers deployed “organic,” “all natural,” and “pesticide free,” but her claims were rooted only in how that language was deployed on farmers’ websites. It was not evident she’d ever asked farmers about what kind of farming they were actually doing in order to assert themselves (via their website) as organic, all natural, or pesticide free farmers. Her research is full of potential were she to step outside the text.
Another researcher whose work was also full of potential involved interviewing a midwife and the ways she negotiated the complexity of doing her job, caring for mothers and their babies, while having to work within a traditional western medical hospital system. Here no texts were surfaced in this research.
In both cases, the research seemed to be lopsided in some way. I longed to better understand how and why the researcher decided to focus on what she decided to focus on.
I’m proposing not that we have more context or more surfaces, but that the contexts and traces we do report on can be reviewed. It’s not that there is an a priori truth out there that we’re seeking to represent through complicated and rigorous research methods, but that we have to substantiate our claims to audiences beyond rhetoric and writing studies and that might mean we adopt and adapt methodological devices and analytic tools that attend to more than one or two data points and pet theories. I’m also wondering if our voices might be marginalized because of the assumptions outsiders might make about the political positions motivating our research. Let’s at least be honest about those positions up front by surfacing the ways we came to know what it is we say we’ve come to know.
I propose that specific grounded researcher writing practices might better facilitate this aim. These artifacts might be published alongside our data or at least in appendices and then be available for review by readers. We might not always have quantitative data, therefore. And we might not always be performing discourse analyses. But we will have observational traces, heuristics, dimmensionalizations, and theoretical memos that yield an archive of reviewable research practices that lend us credibility.
1. Create, refine, and publish samples of the various observational heuristics used to capture the complexity of a researched situation.
2. Engage in dimmensionalization activities wherein the bounding off of one code from another is traceable–visually and textually.
3. Continuous theoretical memoing. These theoretical memos become a kind of therapeutic space wherein the researcher might vent their theoretical predispositions or preoccupations, place them on a kind of digital bookshelf, revisit them later, but at least dump whatever kind of Foucaultian, Deweyan, Blablablaian philosophy runs the risk of dominating the investigative gaze at the beginning or midway through the collection and analysis of data.
This is what gets surfaced. It’s a kind of admitting, confessing, acquiescing to the reality that the very lens through which we look shapes what it is we see. So. Let’s show folks our lenses.
Does that make sense? My slides are here, by the way.
